When the feelings is melted by sorrows or joys
Watery feelings flood to the eyes pond
And spills over from the eyelid's edge
As
a glisten diamond's piece spins down on the cheek.
When the feelings is melted by sorrows or joys
Watery feelings flood to the eyes pond
And spills over from the eyelid's edge
As
a glisten diamond's piece spins down on the cheek.
this is perfectly written.i tried so hard to think of a poem to write about tears.i couldn't think of anything.this is beautiful.
zgłoś
But sometimes heart leads us to what should be write. Thanks for good comment.
zgłoś