4 february 2012

poetry

Bipurna Tara
Bipurna Tara

Tears

When the feelings is melted by sorrows or joys
Watery feelings flood to the eyes pond
And spills over from the eyelid's edge
As
a glisten diamond's piece spins down on the cheek.

SHAYNA CARVER
12 february 2012 at 07:10

this is perfectly written.i tried so hard to think of a poem to write about tears.i couldn't think of anything.this is beautiful.

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Bipurna Tara
16 february 2012 at 10:21

But sometimes heart leads us to what should be write. Thanks for good comment.

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