4 stycznia 2013

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Alicja Kuberska
Alicja Kuberska

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I knocked at your mind.

Let me in - I asked.

I have brought you something,

my crazy thoughts and dreams,

the works collected from

the oceans of creativity.

Look how pretty they are,

even the smallest ones,

smaller than the sand.



I do not want them - you answered.

My world is sterile,

arranged and known.

Your every written poem

Can ruin my calm,

Which was built over years.

The recognition can be painful

Because of its insolence and ignorance.

The questions wake up the sleeping fears.

I prefer to stay safely in

well - known loneliness.

Kahlia Mazacalletti
4 stycznia 2013 o 10:33

Very nice poem, I like the line..."The questions wake up the sleeping fears".....Very good....Kahlia

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Alicja Kuberska
5 stycznia 2013 o 01:30

thank you very much:)))

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Ye Caterpillar
5 stycznia 2013 o 00:28

Great poem! How about translating some more of your work into English? (If not, I'll just have to learn Polish!)

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Alicja Kuberska
5 stycznia 2013 o 01:29

You do not have to learn Polish:)))) I have some poems written in English.Just write to me - my email is alicja107@vp.pl and I will send you more poems. You can find them on New Mirage Journal too - just write my name in google.

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louis gander
5 stycznia 2013 o 18:55

I like the last lines - but I like to prefer to it as solitude. It's a very nice poem and so true. I've heard the same thoughts at times and wish I could think "outside the box" having a greater amount of information and ideas. You must have been the one "knocking on my mind" with all your crazy thoughts and dreams... hahaha

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