24 january 2012

poetry

Naykd Poet
Naykd Poet

Voyage to Fate - Podróż do Fate

Voyage to Fate

Upon entering Cabin 612, an eight by ten room
Little did I know, it would lead to my doom
That water would seep from every crack
Then the thought arrives: ‘Will I ever be going back?'
Alone I wait for help to arrive
But none will come, I’ll struggle to survive
As the last of lights finally flicker out
I’ll be over come with fear and try to shout
But no one will hear, for they have all gone
I nervously start to hum my favorite song
The water will rise leaving just a pocket of air
How much more of this will I be able to bare
With a sudden surge, water filling the room
I now know, it has become my tomb

Times like these suggest life is guided by fate
There seems little room for counter debate
Innocent, guided by optimism and pleasure
Life itself offering up so much to treasure
Then, unbeknownst, unannounced
From out of nowhere, death does trounce
In less than an instant, all is lost
For no matter of reason, no matter of cost
Times like these you know life is guided by fate
There seems no room, for counter debate.

A dedication to those who died alone on the
fateful Costa Concordia pleasure cruise 01-13-2012

Ailill
25 january 2012 at 02:15

engaging theme.. I liked how you versed it.. and the rhyme effects.. It also sounds good read aloud.. Plus, it offers words to reflect on.. All around.. good poem...

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Naykd Poet
25 january 2012 at 03:19

Thanks for your read and comment - glad you enjoyed it...

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Arthur Geddes
25 january 2012 at 11:36

On cue with the perils of life.

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Naykd Poet
25 january 2012 at 15:14

thanks, I was absorbed by the thought of what it must have been like for those few that did not make it out from the capsized cruise ship in Italy - recognizing that little did they know where fate would take them when they first chose that path

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