Some intolerants,
I love everybody as God does
Rreply my hello once.
I’m not supposed to be like HIM
I’ll be right like he need.
Listen to me,
How fair is your Creative?
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not so fair
zgłoś
what about version 3?
zgłoś
Id suggest a better edit of the poem: Some are intolerant: - I love everybody as God does - They reply to my hello once. Im not supposed to be like him - But Ill be rightous like he needs me to be. Listen to me: How fair is your creator? ========================== Thats my suggested edit. What do you think? Have I got the sentiment of the poem correct?
zgłoś