Listen to me (Version 2)


Some intolerants,
I love everybody as God does
Rreply my hello once.
 
I’m not supposed to be like HIM
I’ll be right like he need.
 
Listen to me,
How fair is your Creative?

Rafał Muszer
14 october 2011 at 14:34

not so fair

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Veronika
20 october 2011 at 13:09

what about version 3?

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Tomás Ó Cárthaigh
6 november 2011 at 16:09

Id suggest a better edit of the poem: Some are intolerant: - I love everybody as God does - They reply to my hello once. Im not supposed to be like him - But Ill be rightous like he needs me to be. Listen to me: How fair is your creator? ========================== Thats my suggested edit. What do you think? Have I got the sentiment of the poem correct?

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