You have asked for friendship. It does not reject friendship < friendly >. I do not know I english. Through dictionary translating, I tested (try) to apprehend your poem, but strange things leave (go out) me So, I apologize, but I fail to read your poems, I do not understand they (their).

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I liked how this flowed... the feelings expressed.. etc.. I guess, if I was doing this.. I might not end it the same way.. as a reader, the ending kind of trailed off for me.. but overall, it was an engaging read..

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@dany: It's okay Dany I understand. :) I am also using the online translator to somehow understand your language because I want to read several poems posted in this website.

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@Ailill: thank you for liking my poem. :) I'm so glad that some people like what I wrote. I would be happy to get some advises, suggestions or tips from all of you about writing beautiful and inspirational poems. ",

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"weighty words, simple true emotions captured on paper".. loving this piece..

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thank u so much for your comment Kipruto Muthemba :) :) :) it's motivating...

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I like

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Thank you Johny :)

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one of my poems: "[ "fiery sword" // towards the sky // he lifted his eyes // expecting dawning hopes // towards the sky // he spread shoulders out // to glide wanted // with the wind in expanses // in the hand sharp sword // like the razor // on the head steel blue helmet // at the side woman at one time // he shed blood for her // obstinacy in the mind of damage // on the road red white // there is no retreat // he took an oath // nobody will stop // to stop the death // ]" .... translated and well written? modest

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the poem of yours Johny is nice. :)

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