29 march 2012

poetry

Dora Egan
Dora Egan

Immortal Love

Love equals Death,
Is it the same?
Can we make Death out of Love?
Will it last after Life?
 
I used to love you,
But I don’t anymore.
I used to care,
Now, do I care at all?
You broke my heart,
You played with my mind,
That’s how you broke
Our Immortal Love.
 
Don’t you dare killing yourself!
Don’t you dare hurting yourself!
Live with that;
Live with Pain!
 
Love equals Death,
It’s not the same,
‘Cause Death is the way out,
The way out of living Hell!
I used to love you,
But I don’t anymore.
I used to care,
Now, I don’t care at all!

Jock Engelman
2 april 2012 at 00:49

wow i love how you have used contrasting symetry to show the similarities and differences in the synthesis of the following philophisised thought "Love equals Death, Is it the same? Can we make Death out of Love? Will it last after Life?"

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Dora Egan
2 april 2012 at 01:25

thank you ;))

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