1 april 2012

poetry

Dora Egan
Dora Egan

Porcelain Doll

Stay with me, my darling youth
And lay thy hands upon my chest.
Feel my heartbeat, my porcelain doll.
Stay with me a little bit more.
 
Keep thy eyes sparkling like stars,
Those beautiful brown eyes.
And let thy hair be free and wild,
Like beast, like fire.
 
Move thy lips across my skin,
Don’t stop now, just don’t give in.
Blood, sweat, tears, denial,
It’s not enough, Don’t stop now.
 
Cut through my skin, break all my bones,
Rip my heart out, my porcelain doll.

Jock Engelman
2 april 2012 at 00:41

W O W ! this is just so well written, but i am confused why you onlyhave two lines in the final stanza..? is it for emphasis..? never the less it is interesting and effective :D

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Dora Egan
2 april 2012 at 01:28

Thank you ;D Well, I wanted it to be like a Shakespearean sonnet. That's why it only has two lines in the last stanza.

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Towarzysz ze strefy Ciszy
9 april 2012 at 00:20

thats a good one...

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Dora Egan
9 april 2012 at 01:48

thank you :D

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