30 december 2011

Dead Love

He talked about dying today
And he said I would've probably laughed
If he did die

I giggled at the fake joke
Just to amuse him
But inside I was crying

He talked about passing away
As if it was no big deal
And a little part of my heart broke

I can't imagine what life would be like
What I would be like
If he wasn't here

It brings silent tears to my eyes
And loud knives to my heart
Just thinking about it

I wish he knew
That if he died
I would die with him

Written: 9/26/11


number of comments: 1 | rating: 6 |  more 

Ailill,  

good theme.. I like how the poet versed it.. I guess if I was doing this I might say the line about loud knives different.. I might say it like this: It brings silent tears to my eyes and knives tearing out my heart just thinking about it.. But in general I like how the piece was worded.. Thanks for posting it.. and allowing me to comment..

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