10 may 2012

poetry

Naykd Poet
Naykd Poet

Joyous Tributary Ride

Observing life passage as an undulating wave
Its direction ebb and flow a difficult one to say
Though the simple goal of mastering yet another day
Is ultimately the only true objective for which to seriously pray

No consciousness of Mind can predict an outcome result
A condition that need not raise blame of fault
For it is purely a function of free-will’s assault
And lack of pre-determined guide book, to consult

So render to the joyous tributary ride
For in the end, little remains from which to hide
And by its humble passage, rejoice with pride
Of having been given: breath to be alive.

Joe Breunig
10 may 2012 at 17:31

An enjoyable piece; in my opinion, one could argue that we're been given a guidebook called the Bible! -Joe, Reaching Towards His Unbounded Glory

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Naykd Poet
10 may 2012 at 19:46

Glad you enjoyed this poem Joe, and true that some look to the Bible as a guide to life though some may choose otherwise - each to their choice I guess. But thanks for you comment.

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