12 grudnia 2013

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Tim Kitchen
Tim Kitchen

Just One Child.

 
 
Maybe, just one child is all it would take
born into this world of conflict and hate.
To grow up with a voice all men would hear
who would speak of peace, not war and fear.

Someone who would bring the world peace
and encourage all wars and cruelty to cease.
A man, or woman, the world would listen to
I’m just a man with a simple point of view.

But could it be, it’s already happened before
and no one will listen to anyone anymore.
Perhaps we just need it all to happen again
but would we just listen and carry on the same.
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 

Joe Breunig
12 grudnia 2013 o 16:16

An enjoyable piece; is the child a subtle reference to Christ? Since the last line is a question, perhaps you may want to consider replacing the period with a question mark. -Joe Breunig, Reaching Towards His Unbounded Glory

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Tim Kitchen
13 grudnia 2013 o 10:12

Yes it is, and thank you for reading and commenting, Tim

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