An afternoon of music, a feeling ...
Horizon crimson in the zenith of the firmament
Moment expected in yearning
As a garden waiting for the dawn
The words bloom in our being
With rhythmic movements and cadences
Dance smooth in curves delusional
Among complicit smiles of lovers
How serene lake water’s
It involves me smart leader
Of the universe infinite of words
And dancing, follow happily
The finale say goodbye is slowly
As a drop of dew on the leaf
That tenuous thrill, nostalgic retract
And sweetly falls ...
Poignant - brings home the feeling of the last dance of the ball - getting onto buses for distant cities - putting ones back to something.
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Thank you C E Mac Millan for comment my poem.
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Wonderful and so expressive well done.Thanks for adding too.Have a happy new year.
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Thank you Hosny, have a happy new year too.
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http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lB6a-iD6ZOY
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with smile of course;)
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Thank you Jestem, for the beautiful music, I loved it. And thank you for the smille too.
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I do not know very well English language. However I understand something ... I liked ... ! :) I seldom read English poetry, but I'm beginning to like it.. :) All the best ! :)
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Thank you Albert.... your English is very understandable... All the best to you too! :)
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Excellent Writing..Reviewing the loss and gain nicely..
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Thank you!
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