Aimless Wandering Thoughts

I always search my thoughts
Don’t speak beyond my knowledge
To find out my ultimate goal.
But why can’t I ?
Why I weep and walk
Through endless ways of thoughts ?
 
Why can’t I ?
Read my heart more accurately
Than anybody else encompassed me.
Am I a senseless or sightless sot ?
 
Why I’ve to pass ?
Intolerable inescapable night
That has no day .
Is it the reward of my uncontrollable faults
Or lack of patience ?
 
Why I always become influenced by others ?
And change my goal every now and then.
Why it happens to me again and again ?
Why I’m different from others ?
Why can't I be pleased with the things
That pleases others ?
 
Why I’m always obsessed
In a deep contemplative world ?
Why ? Why ? Why ?

louis gander
16 march 2013 at 16:27

The first step toward wisdom is asking the question "Why?" Wisdom is worth more than intelligence and more than knowledge and more than experience- for it is the melding of all three. Great poem here aktar. ~louis

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Insatiable Sohail
16 march 2013 at 18:16

Intelligence knowledge experience=Wisdom........nice calculation...........Thanks for your evaluation.......Aktar

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louis gander
17 march 2013 at 16:23

You're welcome and no problem. I like the way you write with no hesitation - you don't hold back- not fearing to ask questions... You say enough that the reader knows what you're talking about, yet you allow the reader to ponder the questions/words. Though I am no professional writer nor do I know what 'experts' look for in poetry, I was sincere when I wrote "great poem here". Have a great Sunday :)

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Insatiable Sohail
17 march 2013 at 16:40

Thanks...

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TOUFIQ UL ALAM
7 april 2013 at 11:10

inquisitive...

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