Reactions:16 august 2014 TOUFIQ UL ALAM: hoho!!! Drastic and superb change noted in your style of writing brother... So beautiful... 18 june 2014 TOUFIQ UL ALAM: try some daily journal too... you have good sense for prose work too..,. try it.... 18 june 2014 TOUFIQ UL ALAM: Left in the plate after eating by others.....can be like this - "left in the plate ... 6 february 2014 TOUFIQ UL ALAM: look out for extra spaces.... a fairly good one... Sorry to hear of your loss... and Wel... 29 january 2014 Joe Breunig: An enjoyable piece; not sure if 'illiterate' is the correct word; perhaps 'afraid' or 's... 16 january 2014 Joe Breunig: BTW - the last line should be corrected as follows: Those memories which are now old. ... 9 may 2013 TOUFIQ UL ALAM: hmm.. getting closer ... But I think u need to find a bit more poetic diction... seems l... 3 may 2013 Kahlia Mazacalletti: Beautiful poetry...Love is a strange thing..it can be here on minute and the next minute... 26 april 2013 Kahlia Mazacalletti: What a beautiful poem, I have read it three times....The creator is watching over you...... 17 april 2013 TOUFIQ UL ALAM: Yes, the thing that comes to an inquisitive mind is the question "why"... why ... | Insatiable Sohail: arts / comments |
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