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4 february 2012

What is Life

Not only when we cry we're sad
Or when we smile we're glad
It's only what we feel inside
Not what our faces try to hide,

Rain can fall in a happy day
Sun can shine in the middle of pain
No one can tell, no one can say
What will happen today,

Can't be down, can’t be up
Walking but your feet still stopped
Thinking you're in, while you're out
Entering a room already been locked,

Knowing the wrong, saying it's right
Seeing nothing in the light
Hard to show, easy to hide
That's what life is all about.


number of comments: 3 | rating: 7 |  more 

Ailill,  

I really like the versing of this piece.. and the play on the grey-ness of life.. If I was writing this.. there is one mechanics fix I would make.. Here: That('s) what life is all about but that's a minor thing.. easily fixable and doesn't take away from the expression here.. Good read! thanks for sharing..

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Flowrite,  

I agree completely.

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Mustapha Maaroufi,  

Rain can fall in a happy day Sun can shine in the middle of pain No one can tell, no one can say What will happen today, ---------------- You are right.i see you have a wis look at life. Continue your creativity's path. Thanks.

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