Jock Engelman
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13 march 2012

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Jock Engelman
Jock Engelman

The Triumph Saint

I'm soaring, it's roaring, no longer boring;
I'm laughing, it's flying, no longer crying;
No longer captive, I'm smiling, it's freedom;
I'm crazy, it's hazy, no longer angry;
I'm blooming, it's fumming, no longer grooming;
No longer destined, I'm unread, it's unsaid.

(p.s. if anyone wants to know what a triumph saint can look like, it is here at this link: http://motorivista.com/wp-content/uploads/2011/09/triumph-saint-motorbikes-422x281.jpg )

Naykd Poet
13 march 2012 at 13:00

the picture in this case is worth a 1000 words lol, it puts the poem totally into perspective however, the last line leaves me scratching my head and the `;' should be a period to signify the end.

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Jock Engelman
13 march 2012 at 21:09

wow thank you for your input yes i didnt mean to leave the semi-colon on the end

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