15 january 2013

poetry

Patricia Etienne
Patricia Etienne

The Monopolize Way

With your narcissistic aspects,
How can I grow under your shadow?
Must I always carry a panhandling,
or...
Break
Away?
Either way...
The thought of you give me the fear.
Must I remain passive
so I can be pet around?
Must I act coercively-
Again...
How can I break loose
From this-
Hypochondria form of you?

Kahlia Mazacalletti
16 january 2013 at 03:14

I love this poem, sounds like a person I used to know......Kahlia

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Patricia Etienne
16 january 2013 at 08:06

Thanks for your comment Kahlia, I'm glad that you like this piece.

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louis gander
16 january 2013 at 12:56

Patricia, there are so many "bad apples" in this world. I talk to used and abused women all the time. It's a very sad world. Most women find guys at bars (they call them clubs now just to draw the women there) but they are still bars. I know guys. They go to bars for "fun" without responsibility. I'm not sure of your history, but I pray that you find freedom and peace. No guy is worth dating UNLESS he shows respect to EVERYONE around him. I wish you well :) ~louis

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louis gander
16 january 2013 at 12:59

Let me clarify myself... No guy is worth dating UNLESS he shows GENUINE respect

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Patricia Etienne
22 january 2013 at 07:44

Hi Louis, thanks for your good wishes! I'm always going after freedom and peace that's my MO. It's a good alaboration from your part- sorry this piece has nothing to do with men in general.

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