14 february 2012

poetry

Irena
Irena

Our paths

Our paths shall cross
They will cross deep blue seas
with white seagulls flying above
They will cross the green Highlands
with white clouds at their peak
They will cross the fury rivers
with silver fish swimming
Our paths will cross
They will cross day and age
They will cross our hope and rage
Our mists and dreams
They will cross all of our lives
But they will never meet...

Christopher Thor Britt
14 february 2012 at 15:16

I love the imagery, the simplicity and the sentiment...love it. I will definitely read more of your work as it comes...keep writing. CB

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Irena
14 february 2012 at 15:32

It's a support to me,thank u very much,I really do apreciate this:)

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Tomás Ó Cárthaigh
15 february 2012 at 14:18

So true... we meet so many in passing, and yet, we never meet them.

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Lo
23 february 2012 at 03:09

Beautiful! I can visualize everything you describe and I especially like the ending (:

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