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21 february 2013

Friends 2

The enduring love of faithful friends
is my shield against the false pretense
of those who laugh and smile with me
but through their actions, subtlely
have in their hearts abandoned me.


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Naeem,  

excellent excellent!!! Love it!

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Jaro,  

Subtlely- is it proper ? Or subtlety :) I am foreigner and English is not my native language:) Have a nice day:)

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David de la Croes,  

Hi Jaro, thanks for comment. I checked the word extensively before I insert it into the poem, as I also was unsure. "Subtlety" (noun) is the quality or state of being subtle. "Subtlely (adverb) is an alternative spelling of subtly. (see http://en.wiktionary.org/wiki/subtlely )

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