25 october 2012

HORIZON

Strolling on the sandy beach,
Enjoying the cool gentle breeze, 
I looked at the people around.
Little children built sand-castles,
Young couples sat close together,
Elderly people enjoyed the waves.
My eyes fell upon a pair -
A grandchild and a grandfather,
Talking and munching ground-nuts.
One rising sun, the other setting...
Miles apart, yet, both rising and setting
At the same place - the horizon.

[Published in the 'feelings' column of 'Horizon', the Saturday supplement of 'The Assam Tribune' on 13 August 2011]


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Joe Breunig,  

An enjoyable piece; loved the theme; would like to make a suggestion with some slight changes: HORIZONS Strolling on the sandy beach, enjoying cool gentle breezes, I looked at the people around. Little children built sand-castles, young couples sat close together, elderly people splashing in waves. My eyes fell upon a pair - a grandchild and a grandfather, talking and munching ground-nuts. One rising sun, the other setting... Miles apart, yet, both rising and setting; at this same place, I'm appreciative of the intersections of our... horizons. -Joe Breunig, Reaching Towards His Unbounded Glory

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