Poetry

Safira
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11 april 2012

Cruelty inside

Do you like sorrow
Do you like pain
Do you need someone who fells the same
Desire for blood is in your veins
Don't pretend it's not that way

Your blood look eyes
Snow white skin
Come with me, and we will win
There are no one but us and prey
We will drain them, as they say

The dawn is near
The snow is red
We are gone
But we'll come again.


number of comments: 2 | rating: 10 |  more 

Dora Egan,  

bilo bi ti bolje da si u zadnjem stihu napisala: but we'll come back. al ova mi je najbolja do sad ;))

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Safira,  

onda mi se nebi rimovalo tj nebi bilo ritma (ni ovako se ne rimuje) hvala :D to je jedna od prvih koje sam napisala, imam još jednu sličnu koja je u izradi već godinu i pol jer nemam zadnju kiticu :/

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