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Rhiannon
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11 february 2012

Welcome to Indifference


So I’ve decided I’m sick.
Not sick like coughing
More like I need a new trick
Kinda been thinking about offing
Myself-fail to see life’s value
Guess that’s pretty depressing
But it sure is true
Don’t feel like addressing
My multitude of issues
Just forget I ever was
I’m sure you won’t need any tissues
But I hope I left your mind abuzz
I try expressing how I feel
Turns out no one listens
And my poetry doesn’t feel real
It’s too plain, none of it glistens
So in the end
My emotions are still trapped
Guess that makes it easier to defend
My heart from being sapped
But I’m still really sick
Of being who I am
I need to change quick
This life is a sham.
I’m even tired of this poem
It won’t make a difference
And I’m really sick of rhyming
Welcome to indifference.
 
 


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Skyler,  

I don't think this poem needs to 'glisten'. It's real and raw. I hope you creating this has helped you cope (Even though you said it didn't in the poem)

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Rhiannon,  

Well thanks :) I usually feel like expressing my emotions in the form of poetry is pointless, though I do it often, unless people read them.

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Skyler,  

I agree with you to a point on that one. I have a whole book of poems that I found helped me but then I would never let anybody read those blatant emotions. I also have poems that I can hide behind the words and still get my feelings across. Those are the ones I let people read because its more like art that way.

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Rhiannon,  

Hmm, I suppose that does makes sense

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