23 january 2012

The Full Moon

It was 3 am and I had the moon
Shinning down on my face
The lovely moon that is so full in bloom
Throwing her shinning light on my face
Like my love who is up above and so full of love!

I know my love is now looking and smiling at me
And showering all his love down on me!
I felt his warmth through the moon rays
And I was talking to him
I prayed that the moon never went away
But alas it was dawn and time to welcome a new day!


number of comments: 1 | rating: 5 |  more 

Ailill,  

Good poem about the moon.. and its use as a simile.. I like the versing, imagery, and personalizing of the moon... good piece.. thanks for the read..

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