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22 march 2012

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Angel
Angel

I Love You

When someone says i love
you
you cannot help but say
if life gets tough and crazy
will you love me anyway?
And what of the words that people say
when they want us apart?
Their words can hurt and pierce us deep
and ignoring them's a start
to happiness forever
or as long as it can last
because when it comes to love,
from it, its hard to fast
How else would you say those words to me?
Would you do it in a song
or would you say them in a poem
one thats not vey long?
So what would you do?
Would you dance or sing?
Or would you go to the next step
and give me a ring?
but the question is would i say yes?
Would i marry you?
Or could i just say three words.
I Love You.

IDON'TKNOWWHATTODO
11 april 2012 at 22:43

INSPIRING, SHARE WITH ME YOUR TALENT, I WANT TO LEARN FROM THE MASTER I'M SERIOUS, THIS IS UNBELIEVIBLY GOOD LOVING IT 100/100

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Zofia Wingmaker
19 march 2014 at 17:04

I've never really been good at rhyme scheme so to me, this is one of the best poems I've ever read. I really like how the last line is out of the rhyme scheme so it puts a little more emphasis on it than just italics would have.

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