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kyra
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20 march 2012

Good-bye.

I know im not the greatest friend,
& that i do things im not proud of,
but one things for sure,
i was always someone you could count on.
I'd be there for you whenever you needed the support,
I even tried my hardest to make this work.
No harm needed, no anger in disguise,
i just hate the fact that you'd always lie.
If she wasnt there, then who would be?
you know deep down it would only be me.
Don't hate me for choosing what is right,
but except the fact that im not willing to fight.
im moving forward, and i dont intend on looking back,
im going to work my own shit out, get my life back on track,.
Please don't forget me whatever you do,
'cuz even though i hate your decisions, im still proud of you.


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Jock Engelman,  

I like your use of coloquial language, but may i ask without offending you, what is your structure? and you seem to be very personal with your writing, it seems like you wrote it in haste..? maybe take a little bit more time before uploading..? feeel free to check out my works and inquire and suggest alterations :D

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