28 february 2012

poetry

Lo
Lo

About a Boy..

Sometimes I say things just to make you laugh
I love to hear you laugh
And the way your eyes smile right along
Beautiful and blue
When you light up, so do I
Happy looks good on you

C R Clark
28 february 2012 at 23:50

This is a very nice write. "Happy looks good on you? I do like that line.

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Lo
28 february 2012 at 23:56

Ohh thank you lots!

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Jock Engelman
6 march 2012 at 01:33

yes i do too, have you been writing poetry about loved ones for a long time..?

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Lo
6 march 2012 at 03:24

Yeah I have, pretty much since I started writing. The people around me are a big inspiration sometimes. Have you?

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Jock Engelman
6 march 2012 at 03:37

yes i had, i did for a very long time, then i had a few issues with deaths in my life and i suddenly found it difficult to write again about love, i guess you could say that i became kind of cynical, but i am coming around :) dont worry i am working on some love ones at the moment

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Lo
7 march 2012 at 13:32

Yeah, I have experienced similar trouble with deaths in my life also, it was really hard to get "back in the game" so to speak...but it gets easier over time. I have thought about posting my pieces about the loved ones I have lost, but I never have.

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