21 february 2012

poetry

Lo
Lo

Sun

Good morning sun, you're back again
To greet me with a smile
You make the night time disappear
And bring me back to life
When I'm sick and when I'm sad
You're always there for comfort
To keep me warm and love me
Blowing kisses on my cheeks
I love you sun, everything you do
I love the light you shine
So when you hide behind the clouds
I’ll be there for you
I’ll sing the songs I know you love
So I can comfort you, too
 

Jock Engelman
21 february 2012 at 04:46

wow.. i mean like WOW!, i have such difficulty writting about nature of such a simplictic nature, yet you have made it so emotively understandable and the interconnectedness amongst all living things and the sun... i look forward to reading more of your works, i hope that you enjoy my works... :)

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Lo
21 february 2012 at 06:37

Ohh thank you so much! Thanks for reading this, I love feedback of any kind, but that is such a great a great compliment (: and I absolutely look forward to reading your works!

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byłem...
21 february 2012 at 09:50

From me to You:http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9fXuO4BtSOc

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Lo
21 february 2012 at 14:51

Thank you so much!! The Beatles are actually a HUGE influence in my life and in my work (: Great video :D

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SHAYNA CARVER
23 february 2012 at 06:03

this is so pretty.nature gives to you - and you give back to nature.this is really good.i try to think of nature poems to write,but i can't come up with anything.this poem is so true.the sun does cheer people up,and has an aura all its own.this poem makes you think just how precious nature really is.

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Lo
23 february 2012 at 23:53

Thank you! Nature is a big part of my life. I get really inspired to write about it when I'm spending time in and around it.

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