23 february 2012

poetry

SHAYNA CARVER
SHAYNA CARVER

THE PAINTING

a sacred work of art that is deserving of devotion,
hung with honor high above the rest with its glory,
a sensation of recognition came over me - it was a strong emotion.
this painting of beauty has its own story.

it's a special message that he painted just for me,
it touches my heart and soul deeply that he put it up for show,
deep in me forever will the image always be.
how grateful i am to him for doing that for me - someday he will know.

it's a painting of an angel - a cherished symbol and token,
he painted this angel to seal our bond forever,
this is his promise to me that will never be broken.
even in death we'll be together.

this can only be fully understood by the esoteric and the initiate,
i'm so thankful and appreciative that i'm one of the chosen few,
this can only be figured out by a person with special knowledge and wit.
i never thought how my life would be - but my guardian angel always knew!

 

Cynthia
9 march 2012 at 00:23

WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!! I can't believe you haven't got a comment on this write before me. This is so beautifully penned. Well done Shayna. :O) Keep up with the great work. Keep on penning. Thank you so very much for sharing your wonderful and creative talents with us. We all truly appreciate it. *S* Cynthia

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SHAYNA CARVER
9 march 2012 at 03:18

thank you.i appreciate the nice comment.this is very personal to me.it's a true poem.it's an experience that i really did see,and just knew.it's a long story.

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Cynthia
12 march 2012 at 02:03

:O) You are most welcome. *S* Cynthia

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Jock Engelman
13 march 2012 at 05:00

yes it is amazing that it took almost two weeks to get a comment WOW! i dont really understand your poetic structure..? what is it..?

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SHAYNA CARVER
20 march 2012 at 22:35

my poem writing is strange - i know.ha ha ha!! i don't have any special way to write.i'm more spiritual on the dark side - so my poems are dark.i also believe in the aterlife - so that's why they're mostly about death.my poems are what i experienced, believe in, and what i feel.

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