21 march 2012

poetry

Bipurna Tara
Bipurna Tara

Competition

You won and I lossed,
You are happy and I am sad,
You get pride I lossed pride,
There is no very different
You become idle and I didn’t
You knew work hard and you did already
Friends be careful but  I am doing hard work.

PA
21 march 2012 at 17:06

Hey! Came across this. I wanted to point out that there is no such word as 'lossed'; may be what you seek is 'lost'. Also do not use '

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Bipurna Tara
24 march 2012 at 10:06

search on Google.

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PA
21 march 2012 at 17:08

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PA
21 march 2012 at 17:08

Heck! :P

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