9 july 2012

poetry

Elizabeth
Elizabeth

Come Back

Your not the girl you used to be,
Your not the friend I had.
Some get better over time,
You've just gotten bad.
Your not the girl you used to be,
Although I wish you were.
I wish that girl would just come back,
'Cause I'm really missing her.

Ailill
10 july 2012 at 00:57

this piece flows well.. good expression of longing..

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Tribhawan Kaul
10 july 2012 at 09:09

We sorely miss our best friends. Expressive.

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Elizabeth
11 july 2012 at 02:56

Thank you both for the complements! They are very encouraging!

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