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Radwa
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2 november 2011

How I want him?


I
need him to embrace me,
Not
to scold me and snub me.
I
need him to open his arms so widely for me,
When
all the doors have been slammed in my face.
I
need him to believe in me,
not
to doubt me.
I
want him to guide me,
Not
to hurtfully criticize me.
I
want him to erase my pains
By
a soft touch, a tender look, or a comforting word.
I
want him to carry me,
When
my own pillars collapse.
I
want him to need me,
Because
he loves me.
In
return, he shall have my devotion and sacrifice.
 


number of comments: 4 | rating: 13 |  more 

Joe Breunig,  

An interesting and thought-provoking piece; although people can conceptualize ideals for their relationships, it's truly sad how few couples work jointly towards unity and a successful union; I also enjoyed how the title introduces doubt, for real relationships take continual effort. Joe Breunig, Reaching Towards His Unbounded Glory

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Radwa,  

Thank you! Your comment is very inspiring!

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