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16 march 2013

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patty turner
patty turner

her voice

she is screaming in pain.

no one can hear her,
no one is trying,
no one cares.

she can't see.

darkness is all around her,
the cold creeps up on her.

the only warth is the tears she sheds.

the darkness is still and silent.

she runs and runs,
it's pure darkness.

she can't find away out.

louis gander
17 march 2013 at 04:18

Sometimes it seems no one cares. It's usually because those who would help are having troubles of their own. This world is up-side-down because of sin. REPENTANCE is the ONLY way to change it. But man has too much pride and thinks he can survive it over the pain of others- who, as your poem correctly states, "can't find a way out". The 'good news' is that God IS always there...

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