Why Can't It Be ?

Why can't it be? 
Were destined to love each other, 
yet we cant be together.

I love you, You love me, 
but to show has the question on HOW? 

Why is the world so against, 
yet on our love we give all our best.

To apart us no one can set, 
cause all the odd to us we bet.

In GOD's time, 
I know you will be with me, 
In the right place, 
Where all we should be. 

indira mukhopadhyay
27 june 2012 at 20:46

A good poem.

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Xenita Joy Dublas
27 july 2012 at 03:59

thank you for the appreciation :)

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ApisTaur
27 july 2012 at 04:07

I think so too. :)

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Xenita Joy Dublas
28 july 2012 at 11:26

thank you Apis Taur .

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Xenita Joy Dublas
2 august 2012 at 02:34

thanks for the vote Jaroslaw Kaplon and Tinker Bell

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Paganini
28 august 2012 at 09:54

A little too easy text, you could add more poetic. However, a big plus for the excitement. Regards, P.

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Xenita Joy Dublas
29 august 2012 at 03:09

thanks thanks :)

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