1 april 2012

Shut Eyes Open


Once you twinkled and sparkled with life in life-
That was then.
Later they abandoned you
and decay rose up out of the Earth to sup 
on your juices-
But you didn't mind-
How could you?

Nothing sinister happened-
that's just your imagination,
grinding colourful thoughts.
The odd tramp sneaked in and holed up for a while-
drinking.

The mist that fell that summer night
moved the mind of the poet.

One day, soon, the people
will move back in.
Children will laugh and throw crumbs
out of the old windows-
feeding warbling thrushes and chirping sparrows.


number of comments: 2 | rating: 1 |  more 

Jock Engelman,  

very nice use of imagery, i love it!, feel free to analyse my works! but i think that you may have made a few spelling mistakes. :D

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Ye Caterpillar,  

Cheers Jock, I appreciate your reaction and I'm happy that you liked my response to 'Puste oczy starego domu'. Just out of my pedantic curiosity, which words do you think I spelled wrongly? You know that the Yanks spell 'color' and we Brits spell 'Colour' - they take the 'u' out of a lot of words - was that it? Please let me know. Bro, if I can get the time, I will read your story and give feedback. I'm mad busy right now- got a baby daughter to look after, a forest to plant, and all kinds of environmental and Human Rights campaigning to do. Bad shit is happening in England - all kinds of ultra-destructive 'developments' are destroying our remaining countryside; the UDHR and UNCAT are being constantly violated here. I've just heard on the radio that BritGov are going to systematically intercept ALL internet activity, e-mails, texts, phone-calls, etc.etc. Total 1984! We're drifting rapidly into fascism, like the USA with Obama's NDAA. Then there's the RCA, my other project- check out RESIST CARDIAC ARREST. Sorry to rant on, mate, but as you see, things are hotting up. Enjoy that bike, and enjoy your freedom - but be ready to defend it... All the best, Jeremy

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