14 february 2012

poetry

SHAYNA CARVER
SHAYNA CARVER

MY CANDLE

when i light my candle - i always say i love you,
i watch the flame slowly burn - i know our love is true.

your presence fills the air around me - it's so strong,
i let my spirit go to you - my heart sings a song.

the flames flickering - is really a beautiful sight,
it's a symbol of our love - which will always shine bright.

i'll light a candle for you - every day of my life,
you give me peace of mind, heart, and soul - and take away the worlds' strife.

my candle is our love - sacred and pure,
we're apart now - we'll be together soon, i'm sure.

when i blow out my candle - i always tell you good night,
after the flame goes completely out - you know everything's all right.

Tomás Ó Cárthaigh
15 february 2012 at 14:19

I adore the rhyme in this!

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SHAYNA CARVER
18 february 2012 at 00:25

thank you for the kind words.i appreciate them.i tried sending you a message,but it didn't go through.

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Bipurna Tara
19 february 2012 at 07:33

This is little different than mine.

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SHAYNA CARVER
23 february 2012 at 04:49

i tried so hard to think of a different poem when i wrote this. all the poems i wrote, was a little over a year ago. i try to write different, but with how i feel at the time.

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