Monday:
He sharpens his dream
By the hone of the illusion,
Under his arm
He put roses
And a bit of of life's basils
Then goes to his work.
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Tuesday:
He says to the beloved:
Tomorrow, when the dreams tree leaves
On our stature,
And the light leapt smiling
In Our eyeballs
Humbly will come the sea
And give us its waves.
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Wednesday:
From the breast of the clouds he suckles
Five songs,
And by the stone
He slaughters the weathercock.
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Thursday:
He irrigates his memoirs
With the water of trouble,
In the evening
He expectes to be kidnapped.
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Friday:
When he comes to the cafe
He drinks from his cup
A quantity of eulogies
About the members of his tribe,
And when he goes out
He buries his misgivings in his pockets.
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Saturday:
He goes to the city bar
And behind him he pulls
The chariot of the grief,
Instills in the field of his body
Seedlings of the wine
To make himself melted.
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Sunday:
His feet take him
Where the nightmares of the road are,
His eyes lurk among the passers-by.
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thnx budleja.
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vivid and deeply metaphoric..
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And what a sunday!!: "Good stuff Mustapha"
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Thank you very much ,Kipruto
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You are a tasteful, thank you for your presence here ،Naykd.
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I found it deeply rooted in one's expiriece. As I continue this thought, it not a common thing in the West to say both lirically and existentially, in other words: true. In this poem, there is something as our Polish noblist called "force of a word". Actually, it comes from spotainity of the expirienceing of world and one's place in it. In Europe, there is not so many poems like this, that brings togheter architecture and though, as I can say this in that matter. However, your point of view, as you illustrated in this poem, is something worth of care. Because thought, spirit, law and even God himself is vulnerable, this is lesson I found in my nihilistic West.
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Thank you very much for this analytical comment, and I was amazed when you said:( In Europe, there is not so many poems like this). My sincere greetings to you,Fabrycy.
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