25 december 2011

poetry

Polby Saves
Polby Saves

Dead to Me

by Polby Saves

I had a dream and in it someone told me that you had died
In this dream I didn't ask why, figured i knew
Didn't want to press it
So having not heard from you for several months
You call me, really needing to talk, but you leave a message
Sorry, I was asleep, busy
Having this dream in which I'm told you're no longer alive
It didn't seem a wise thing to tell you next day
When I returned your call you said everything was fine
I knew you were lying and that to me, you were
Dead, at least unconsciously

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Kerysa
26 december 2011 at 03:09

I think the purpose of the poem was lost but I loved the twist of words of the end. Overall I really liked it, just becuase of it's realalistic nautre. Great job (: -K

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