14 december 2011

poetry

Judith Alekadala
Judith Alekadala

THE CREATOR

He made the sun to brighten the day,
The moon and the stars to brighten the night,
The seas to separate the land,
The waters to keep the fish,
and the creator saw it was good.
 
He made the earth to be habitable!
The seeds in it to produce trees,
He made animals big and small,
wild and tamed,
and the creator saw it was good.
 
He created human beings to watch over the earth,
to reign over the birds in the sky,
to reign over the fish in the seas,
to reign over the animals.
and the creator saw it was good

Małgorzata Krupińska-Nowicka
28 december 2011 at 16:57

Brzmi trochę jak religijna piosenka.

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SHAYNA CARVER
27 february 2012 at 03:56

i never thought of things like this.this is so true.this is a beautiful poem.

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Flux
27 february 2012 at 15:00

Love it. Though I must admit, I have read a few poems like this before, but your representation of Him is quite nice. :)

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Jock Engelman
27 february 2012 at 21:07

i quite like the structure format, it is easy to read and it flows nicely, except for the "wild and tame" line... :S

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