ALL WORKS Poetry (1)
About me

14 october 2011

poetry

Lizzie
Lizzie

You dont even know

People say life is hard
people dont  even know the half of it
they feel like they need help
when there are people that how it way worst
wow, people theses days
they always want something new
when some people dont even have a thing
Yes are world is upside down and what can i do
Im only one person
One person that is alone and has no one
So how can one person fix something so big.

Black Inez
15 october 2011 at 08:56

I don't like it

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Ankit Damani
17 april 2012 at 23:59

im not sure about this. could you work on the grammatical errors at least? lines 4 and 5 dont sound like english to me.

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